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 Post subject: Toshirama Senju - The Peace Agreement ! (new chapter)
 Post Posted: Fri Mar 05, 2010 10:24 pm 
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Age : 28

Rank : Jônin (ANBU)

Weapon(s) : Kunai's and Shuriken's

Element(s) : Water

Kekkai Genkai : None

Personality : Toshirama is the son of the first Hokage, Hashirama Senju, and is a calm and collected person, as well as kind, and do has a great sense humor, even in some stressful situations. He is open for other peoples, and always listens to you, if you have something in mind, even if it's on the private front. He is a well known person in Konohagakure, but there are not many who knows that he is the first's legacy.
Toshirama sees girls time to time, but when he is in the ANBU that isn't the thing that is the most important one, but he is happy to see women now and then.

Pride is a thing that Toshirama sees as a very important thing. "Without your pride, you got nothing !" (a quote from Toshirama Senju himself)


History/Background : Toshirama was born right after Hashirama Senju(his father) had defeated Madara Uchiha and did became Hokage. Now that Hashirama was Hokage, he had many things that he needed to do, and without thinking about it, he almost forgot his child. Therefore Toshirama was raised by his mother, Tisaku Senju (she got the Senju name after she got married with Hashirama).
Tisaku was a very good mother and raised Toshirama good. He did go to school as other kids who wanted to be shinobies, in other words, he was on the ninja academy. The teachers on the academy, quickly spotted Toshirama, and called him a talented kid.
Toshirama graduated at the age of 10, and just kept going up the stairs.

Chapter 1 - The Peace Agreement


Toshirama was sent to the Sand Village with the Third Hokage. The peace agreement was about to be signed, and Toshirama’s job was to keep the things under control, prevent attacks against the Third Hokage and the Kazekage as well. Toshirama had been send in advance to look after enemy shinobies, and if he did see some, take care of them. Everything had to be perfect before the agreement. Konohagakure had fought for this so long, a peace agreement with the sand, and now when they were so close, there was nothing, just nothing, who should get in the way.
Toshirama was now hundred meters, or some from the Sand Village, and everything still seemed to be fine. He ran all the way from the leaf to the sand, and now it was almost over. He could see the big gate now. Toshirama started to walk, and started to think as well.
“What if the Sand just would attack them instead of sign the peace agreement, that would be a big mess ! But that is not going to happen when I am on guard !”
Toshirama was on his way to find a hotel, and a big, expansive massage ! He was totally beaten up after this long trip, and worst of all, it wasn’t over yet.
Toshirama woke up in a big hotel room. “Now the Hokage will soon arrive.” He thought, and was walking out to the shower. After he was finished with his shower he ate, and then he did go out to the center of the sand to hear what the people of the sand, really thought about the new agreement.
“Hi. I’m from the Leaf Village, Konohagakure. I am here to keep things safe, and I just wanted to ask what some people of the sand, thought about this whole peace agreement thing? Can you please help me out?” The man answered with a relaxed voice followed by a little smile:”Follow me, and I will give you answers.”
Toshirama did as the man wanted him to do, and followed him. The man stopped after almost a half kilometer, still not saying any words. The man turned around and said:”You want some answers, don’t you?” The man started to laugh, but Toshirama didn’t knew what the funny part of this was, so he just smiled nicely. And in less than a second, the man’s grinning face turned to a deathly serious face, and he shouted:”Get him guys!”


If you want to comment on this story, you are free to do it, but don't spam it up - and don't leave bad comments on the picture (it took pretty much time to make)

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 Post subject: Re: Toshirama Senju - RP
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There will come at least one new chapter each week, and I will do more when my schedule allows it ! Happy reading !

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 Post subject: Re: Toshirama Senju - RP
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If you want to comment on this RP, you are free to do it, but don't spam it up - and don't leave bad comments on the picture (it took pretty much time to make)

actually, the picture is great :bd

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 Post subject: Re: Toshirama Senju - RP
 Post Posted: Sat Mar 06, 2010 9:30 am 
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What do you mean by "to make"?
Did you make it?

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 Post subject: Re: Toshirama Senju - RP
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Kiba wrote:
What do you mean by "to make"?
Did you make it?


Yup, I can show you how next time I see you. :P

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 Post subject: Re: Toshirama Senju - RP
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Thanks, but didn't you took the real senju and then edited him ? :)

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 Post subject: Re: Toshirama Senju - RP
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Image, I took this picture, and cut Tobirama out, and then I had done the rest of the uniform myself. Then I had zoom in and did something that you can't see the white lines, there were before. Can't explain it all in a message. . .

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 Post subject: Re: Toshirama Senju - RP
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How is this an RP?

It's really just a character... An RP is a story, like a book. Not a character and his information.

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 Post subject: Re: Toshirama Senju - RP
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Uchiha wrote:
How is this an RP?

It's really just a character... An RP is a story, like a book. Not a character and his information.

Easy. . . I said that I would do the rest later, so that means that I hadn't done the story, or other things that is missing yet. ;)

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The Pic is great Naruto. But, I would have loved to see some Kekkai Genkai in him being a Senju. We have seen only one Kekkai Genkai in Senju clan and another one of your creative imagination would have been great.

Any way great work. Post your RP parallel to manga releases. Manga is finished in say 2-3 mins after 7 days of waiting every week. Would love to enjoy a fan creation after that.

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 Post subject: Re: Toshirama Senju - RP
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krishna.kumar wrote:
The Pic is great Naruto. But, I would have loved to see some Kekkai Genkai in him being a Senju. We have seen only one Kekkai Genkai in Senju clan and another one of your creative imagination would have been great.

Any way great work. Post your RP parallel to manga releases. Manga is finished in say 2-3 mins after 7 days of waiting every week. Would love to enjoy a fan creation after that.


Thanks, maybe he will get a Kekkai Genkai later in this story - I will make some story to it, this weekend or maybe sooner ! :P

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 Post subject: Re: Toshirama Senju - RP
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Naruto wrote:
Thanks, maybe he will get a Kekkai Genkai later in this story - I will make some story to it, this weekend or maybe sooner ! :P


Where wud u be posting your story btw..??

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krishna.kumar wrote:
Naruto wrote:
Thanks, maybe he will get a Kekkai Genkai later in this story - I will make some story to it, this weekend or maybe sooner ! :P


Where wud u be posting your story btw..??


I will post it in the first message that I had written, and then edit it. I think I will make it in chapters so that you guys (the ones who actually will read it) can remember were they are the story. ;)

I will add a chapter or two in this weekend !

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 Post subject: Re: Toshirama Senju - RP
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I DON'T like it

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I DON'T like it

Sage mode why are you like that?

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Maybe becouse I'm like that?

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Maybe becouse I'm like that?

Okay, but why don't you just admit, that it's good?

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How can I admit that it's good when I don't like it?

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 Post subject: Re: Toshirama Senju - RP
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I don't care, but as I said, don't comment in this, if you don't like it. ;)

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 Post subject: Re: Toshirama Senju - The Peace Agreement ! (new chapter)
 Post Posted: Fri Mar 19, 2010 9:40 pm 
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You spelled wrong :roll:
Lol, im not that much of a jerk, its good :)
can you plz set numbers on them, so i can see which one you came to ? :)

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