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 Post subject: Character: Hiroshi Yoshio
 Post Posted: Thu Mar 04, 2010 8:44 pm 
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Name: Hiroshi Yoshio
Age: 15
Rank: Chuunin
Weapons: Kunai & Shuriken
Clan: Uchiha
Best Jutsu: Unknown
Kekkei Genkai: Sharingan
Element(s): Fire , Air

He was known as one of the few Uchihas remaining, so he has got the Sharingan.
He is very loyal, and strong too!


Story from Hiroshis angle:
Hiroshi: Mother? Father? where are you? WHERE ARE YOU?!
*crying*
*Hiroshi hears Itachi*
*Hiroshi ran away*

A year later
Hiroshi: FIRE STYLE: FIRE BALL JUTSU!! *Pant*
Akio: Wanna take a match, Hiroshi?
Hiroshi: I can't, Shasara says that i have to practice my fire ball jutsu.
Akio: I can help you with that?
FIRE STYLE: FIRE BALL JUTSU!
Hiroshi: Alright, a match it is!
Show me what you got!

An hour later
Akio: FIRE STYLE: FIRE BALL JUTSU!
Hiroshi: FIRE STYLE: FIRE BALL JUTSU!
Akio: *pant* *pant* it seems we're even, Hiroshi.
Hiroshi: *pant* Yeah. I better go tell Shasara, that i mastered the Fire ball.
*Hiroshi run ahead Shasara*

Hiroshi: I did it! I've mastered the fire ball!
Shasara: Can i see it?
Hiroshi: Can it wait 'till tommorow? I'm completely done for today.

Five years later
Hiroshi: Fire style: Phoenix flower jutsu!
Akio: Sharingan!
*Akio dodging the Phoenix flower jutsu*
Hiroshi: Sharingan!
Akio: I want to show you my latest technique!
Fire Style: Great fire ball!!!
Hiroshi: Substitution jutsu!
Akio: Water style: Water prison technique!
Hiroshi: Darn it! Im trapped!
But you're too!
*Hiroshi's shadow clone dissapears*
Hiroshi: when you were making the Sharingan, i made some shadow clones!
Then they were figting against you, and you trapped my shadow clone which means you're trapped too!
Hiroshi: Air release: Blade of Wind!
Akio: AHHH!!!
*Akio falls to the ground*
Akio: I...It....Wa....Was...a..good..trai..ning.....maybe....we..should...rest....a...bi...bit.

A day after

Akio: somebody is coming.
Hiroshi: Who?
*Akio climps to the top af the tree*
Akio: It seems to be an Anbu from the hidden leaf village.
ANBU: Hiroshi Yoshio?... I've been send from Shasara.
He wanted you to have this.
*Anbu finds a sword, to Hiroshi*
ANBU: It was your fathers.
*Hiroshi takes the sword, and swings it around*
Hiroshi: Why do i get it?
ANBU: Because, there is.... War, in Konoha.
The Third wanted me to give it to you, in case.... In case, he'll die.
Akio: We've to go help them, Hiroshi !
Hiroshi: I know.
*They run ahead to Konoha*


Some Hours Later
???: We'll take over this country, and make it ours!
Hiroshi & Akio: Not on our watch!
Hiroshi: Fire Style: Phoenix flower jutsu!
*Hiroshi kills somebody*
Akio: Fire Style: Grand fireball jutsu!
*Akio kills somebody*
*Somebody grabs Akio*
*someone is throwing Kunais at Akio*
*Hiroshi kills the one who is holding Akio*
???: Fire style: Grand Fire ball! (against Akio and Hiroshi)
Akio: Water Element; Water Wall
*A giant wall comes up from the ground and saves Akio and Hiroshi*
Hiroshi: Thanks.
Akio: No problem.
Akio: we should inform the others, that the war is over.
Im totally beaten...
*someone throws several Kunais and shurikens after Hiroshi*
Akio: HIROSHI !!! MOVE !!!
Hiroshi: Substitution technique!
Akio: Hiroshi, you got me!
Hiroshi: Air release: Blade of Wind!
*The kunais and Shurikens turns against the others*
Akio: Now it should be safe.

At the third hokage
The third: So the sound are all gone for now?
Hiroshi: yeah, we think so.
Akio: But you better be ready, if they'll show again..
The Third: I see..
I'll award you 2 to be Chuunin without test.
Hiroshi & Akio: Huh?
The Third: Your braveness and fighting skills were those, who saved the village!

Next Day
Hiroshi: Guess that now be became Chuunin, we should go for jonin.
Akio: Relax, we've just graduated...
Hiroshi: .... Akio? Maybe it's time for us, to get a real trainer!
Akio: I think, I've seen a guy named; Kirisha Mamouté, who's a Jonin, and have some very good powers, and skills too. He trained with the 4th Hokage when he was young.
Hiroshi: Alright ! Do you have any idea where he is ?
Akio: ... doh ...
Hiroshi: Do you have any idea of where he is?
Akio: ... no ...
Hiroshi: Danm it.
Akio: We should try heading to the middle of Konoha.
Hiroshi: Maybe we should ask around.
Hiroshi: Hi, do you know where Kirisha Mamouté, is?
???: Kirisha Mamouté? Haven't heard that name in a long time.
Akio: Have you seen him?
???: If i've seen him?
I am Kirisha Mamouté !
Akio & Hiroshi: Seriously ? could you train us?
Kirisha Mamouté: If i can train you? I don't even know you, and then you expect i'll train you, the first time i ever see you? Nah, thats not how i do.
Akio: But.... But... You're the legendary Kirisha Mamouté, so you
*Kirisha Mamouté interrups Akio*
Kirisha Mamouté: Legendary? Yeah once. But then i was hurt in battle, and never fought since...



(Updates will come)

PS. The previous story about him to be At Akatsuki, isn't true.


Please rate or comment :)

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 Post subject: Re: Character: Hiroshi Yoshio
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Yey! :D

You're all improving.
How about we make a topic and copy&paste everybodys characters into it?

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 Post subject: Re: Character: Hiroshi Yoshio
 Post Posted: Fri Mar 05, 2010 7:23 am 
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cool story!
I thought it was real but then, i don't recognize his name in Naruto :))
Keep Up the Good Work!

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 Post subject: Re: Character: Hiroshi Yoshio
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Sakura wrote:
cool story!
I thought it was real but then, i don't recognize his name in Naruto :))
Keep Up the Good Work!

Thanks ;)

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 Post subject: Re: Character: Hiroshi Yoshio
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Uchiha wrote:
Yey! :D

You're all improving.
How about we make a topic and copy&paste everybodys characters into it?

Yeah, so you have to be registred before you can battle :)
The story has been updated

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 Post subject: Re: Character: Hiroshi Yoshio
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Kiba wrote:
Sakura wrote:
cool story!
I thought it was real but then, i don't recognize his name in Naruto :))
Keep Up the Good Work!

Thanks ;)

No prob. :D

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 Post subject: Re: Character: Hiroshi Yoshio
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*Updated*

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 Post subject: Re: Character: Hiroshi Yoshio
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Story from Hiroshis angle, added.
From now on, i'll write on that, only.

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 Post subject: Re: Character: Hiroshi Yoshio
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I'll delete the previous story (the not-Hiroshi-angle)

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 Post subject: Re: Character: Hiroshi Yoshio
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Nice story. Keep it up :)

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 Post subject: Re: Character: Hiroshi Yoshio
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God wrote:
Nice story. Keep it up :)

Glad to hear that from you, God :)
Edit: Big update now.

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 Post subject: Re: Character: Hiroshi Yoshio
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Naruto, where can i find a picture of an Uchiha that hasn't been showed?

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Kiba wrote:
Naruto, where can i find a picture of an Uchiha that hasn't been showed?


Actually you can't. If there is a picture of an Uchiha he had been shown sometime, but maybe you can search on google, and then like for a not so famous Uchiha member. ;)

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 Post subject: Re: Character: Hiroshi Yoshio
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Naruto wrote:
Kiba wrote:
Naruto, where can i find a picture of an Uchiha that hasn't been showed?


Actually you can't. If there is a picture of an Uchiha he had been shown sometime, but maybe you can search on google, and then like for a not so famous Uchiha member. ;)

And then edit him a little :)

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*Updated* Only little.

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 Post subject: Re: Character: Hiroshi Yoshio
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Big update now..

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 Post subject: Re: Character: Hiroshi Yoshio
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I don't like it

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 Post subject: Re: Character: Hiroshi Yoshio
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Naruto-23 wrote:
I don't like it

Thanks !
It was my goal after all :)

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 Post subject: Re: Character: Hiroshi Yoshio
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Hes Sage shit don't worry it's cool ;)

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 Post subject: Re: Character: Hiroshi Yoshio
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Hes Sage shit don't worry it's cool ;)

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